EDITING SERVICES

    • Regular video meetings or phone calls to discuss your writing

    • Regular feedback on your drafts

    • Reading suggestions

    • Discussion or instruction about various aspects of writing craft

    • Attention to overarching elements of the draft, such as character development, pacing, argument, plot, etc

    • Suggestions on what the draft is missing or what can be cut; how a chapter, or the book as a whole, could be structured

    • Direct, specific questions to help you identify and untangle parts of your draft that are confusing or need to be re-articulated

    • Corrections on typos or errors in grammar and spelling

    • Streamlining sentence and paragraph structure for clarity and elegance

David worked with me to hone my thoughts and establish a through-line with my writing. His coaching enabled me to reach my goal of a solid first-draft manuscript.
— Kori Reed, author of Men in the Middle, finalist for Publisher Weekly's BookLife Prize
I was a previously published author of non-fiction, and David eased me into the world of fiction. It was important that I work with people who are friendly and knowledgeable. David is both. His feedback and support are both critical and balanced. As I wrote my collection of short stories, David helped me tease out the best stylistic elements (symbolism, tone, and motifs) and extrapolated them across the text. I highly recommend him, and look forward to working with him again on my next project!
— Desmond Williams, author of The Burning House: Educating Black Boys in Modern America
I had my share of trepidation going into the editing process, but upon reading the first words of the first comments from David I knew that my project had found the right hands and eyes and heart and mind. David has an uncanny ability to highlight the strongest threads of a work, and to help the writer simplify—and in the process strengthen—the work. He pairs a beautiful eye for particular phrasing with a wide-angled view on the structure and workings of the whole. Working with him was a joy, and I know that with his help the writing came closer to its full potential.
— Daniel Cooperrider, author of Speak with the Earth and It Will Teach You: A Field Guide to the Bible (The Pilgrim Press, 2022)